Reuben A

Alo I'm here! Mwaha! HA ha! ha! ha! h! But I forced myself from the warmth of the covers, over to the mirror that hung from my wall. That happens ...

EY! I'm glad you haven't stopped writing this...I almost thought you had! :shock: Well lets get to nit picking! Slowly, light filled the boy’s eyes as he opened them. Ohh ...

Alo I'm here as requested! I probally won't get through everything tonight though, so what ever I don't get to I'll do later! :) His eyes flashed with excitement as ...

Alo again. I'm kind of new to reviewing poetry, so don't take what I say toooo seriously... :) There‘s nothing to do We’ve cut off our own hand hand s ...

Alo. Wow his is clearly a very refined piece! I’m sorry. We both know the truth. I left the ring next to the note, not caring if some bum picked ...

Wow. Everyone has pretty much said everything that there is to be said... I won't repeat what has already been said. (1 little nitpick hahaha) Suddenly- A squirrel jumped out! ...

Alo! Wow I liked this a lot! Just two little nitpicks... :) The blade twisted in the wound. The tall figure in robes crafted of pure shadows cocked it's head ...

Oooh it sounds interesting!! If I write something in green ,it means what ever I say in red after it refers to the green . Everything I write in Blue ...

Alo, guess who's back?!?! *laughs evilly, then sighs* The world of Neitheris had kept on spinning and revolving, replace revolving with something else, or scrap it completely. Revolving sounds too... ...

Alo Rain! Call me blind, but I couldn't find any grammar or spelling mistakes, that hasn't already been pointed out,so everything I'm critting on is personal preference and my opinion ...

Alooo! Since its for school, I showed every grammar/spelling mistakes I could find... But, every once and a while , actually about three times a year , they take my ...

That's so nunu-pie! But warning. look at everyone! I smell a playa! YWS IS A PLAYA! :shock: :shock: :shock:

Wow, it was... wait let me get to everything else when I've done the nit picks... “Dudley! The Professor ha d s the Device.” Dudley also known as Logan helped ...

Elooooo Whisperer! Wow, well its pretty perfect so the things left to crit isn't really all that important, but it might help so... ...holding each other’s hands as they stared ...

WOW!! I don't find pieces that I REALLY like a lot but my word this is good! The only real thing I noticed: At first glance of the boy she ...